HI this is my third blog post this week in writing we did a poem, We had 5 choices Haiku, rhymed poetry, Riddle poem and shape poem. I did haiku the whole purpose is to do the 5-7-5 syllables, Writing
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, September 2, 2021
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ReplyDeleteGood job on your poem, is it about the beach? I like the image you have included at the back of the poem.
One thing to work on for your next blog post is to embed or take a screenshot of your poem and upload that image. Let me know if you would like some help!
Keep up the great work :)
Miss Henderson